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Read & Download Snow White Blood Red 100 ✓ Author's Note As of 09112012 the novella has been edited Grammatical errors only exist in older versionsWhat if all you knew about fairy tales was wrongBook description of Snow White Blood Red A Grimm Diaries Preuel as told by the Snow White ueenI have always wondered why you never asked about my name Was Author's Note As of 09112012 the novella has been edited Grammatical errors only exist in older versionsWhat if all you knew about fairy tales was wrongBook description of Snow White Blood Red A Grimm Diaries Preuel as told by the Snow White ueenI have always wondered why you never asked about my name Was I so superficial to you So stereotypical and mundane Why did you treat me as if. a clever premise adeuately delivered there are enough glowing reviews on here for this bookstory that i feel i don't need to do that thing that i do sometimes where i try to be super duper upbeat positive glowy for the self published authors because yeah there is a lot of crappy self pub out there but it seems unnecessary to shit talk people who are putting it all out there and broadening the scope of the publishing industry and there are some true gems out there unknown to many i really admire gumption and the DIY spirit so sometimes i will oversell something that might not be uite there just to help spread the word and i mean i'm not that discriminating i read monster erotica for goodness' sake but people are raving about this so i feel okay about being a little critical you are your own person make up your own mind while i love the idea behind this book there are some purely technical matters even i can't overlook the curse of the self pub world is editing editors are amazing people they can approach the work the author's baby with an entirely critical mindset and make suggestions to the author about where they have maybe overstepped become too close to the material become too enad with the way words sound at the cost of clarity for example It was one of the coldest winters The snow fell intensively burying the lovely purple poppy fields and covering it with a shroud of a thick layer of dark white snow Somehow the white of the snow that year did not reflect sunlight or shadows It lay grisly over the contour lined land like a dead girl’s white coat made of the fur of dead polar bears like a white wavy carpet that was in no way magical The curves of the land made the snow look like there was a beautiful gigantic dead girl buried underneath it Little did I know that the time would come that this buried girl could only be Snow White or me that the world wouldn’t be spacious enough for both of us i know what is going on in that paragraph and it could be lovely but it just needs a little tweaking to remedy the repetition and some grammatical slip ups but the image is a good one and it is one of those things; you are in a fairytale atmosphere and as you are reading it within that context it is easy to get caught up in the rhythm and the spirit of it and dissonances like that can or less be glossedhowever a bigger problem for me was that of tone the shape of this story is in the form of a letter from the evil ueen of the snow white tale to wilhelm carl grimm in 2012 there is a reason given for this seeming whaaaaa and i accept it but the tone of this oscillates between the traditional formal fairy tale style and some jarring modern day intrusions that just don't work for me I knew my daughter would grow up to be a kick ass girl one day but right then she was still a baby – and yes the ueen of Sorrow says kick ass and stuff like that Because guess what I am an immortal and I have seen everything from Brothers Grimm to Lady Gaga You feelin’ methat is too forcefully contrived and makes me feel like there is a rapping grandma in front of me it is not terrible but it is inelegant and i think the modern day elements could have been gracefully included overall i was intrigued i will be reading the other two preuels because i am interested in where this is going and i do love fairytale retellings i think a professional editor could tighten this up a great deal and despite the problems i had with it i did enjoy reading it as for you if you are reading my reviews you are clearly not a stickler for grammar yeahthis doesn't mean i can't be trusted i will never out and out lie about a book but sometimes i will talk around something if i feel like i cannot fully endorse itcome to my blog

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I were just the monster of the week You know what I think You never had the time to really hate me You wanted to hate me long before you even met me You wanted to scrape my existence and avenge your childhood princess by laying all blame on me What if they didn’t call me the Evil ueen what if I told you the real story from my point of view instead of hers would you ever think of m. Downloaded for free from coukThis was a short story written from the perspective of the Evil ueen Snow White’s mother shedding light on what Snow White really was and letting us know that the fairy tales we have previously heard have all been wrong

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Snow White Blood RedE as an angel Could I ever make you care I know that deep inside of you you adore mebut you’re just scared afraid to admit how much you love the Snow White ueenThis Grimm Diaries Preuels are a number of short books in the form of epistolary diary entries The diaries are of teasers for the upcoming series The Grimm Diaries allowing you to get a glimpse of what to expect of the serie. “Time for a mix of blood milk and dark chocolate to fix thatwrinkles” All those adjectives in this story make it so annoying I don't say that they don't have their place but come ooon